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Corina Gina Papouis
[08.Feb.13 18:11]
wonder if 'ache' would go batter instead of cramp.

a nice poem with some interesting images.

 =  muscle spasm
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
[08.Feb.13 18:23]
Thanks Corina, I will change it into spasm because of the multiple connotations of heartache.




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